Thursday, May 9, 2013

Blog 29: Final Draft: The Effects of Music on the College Student's Writing Process


Should college students listen to music while writing?
            It started at the Starbucks on campus.  I sat at an open table with my headphones on, listening to Bruce Springsteen’s “I’m on Fire”, while I wrote a creative piece.  Then, it hit me—how was the Boss’ song influencing my writing?  Well, not so much Bruce, but music in general.  
            Think about it—nowadays most of us can’t even function without listening to music.  I know I can’t.  Whether I am doing homework, or simply writing for school or pleasure, I’m listening to music.  When homework seems unbearable, I play pop music to help alleviate the stress and push me through.  When I’m writing, I listen to slow music to get me in the mood, to give me ideas, and to help me think faster.  Music helps me—but, does it have the same effect on others?  In other words, does listening to music help or hinder the writing process of college students? 
             Although there have been studies showing music’s negative effects on the college student’s writing process, there has yet to be a study on students listening to their own musical choices while writing.  How would the student’s choice of music affect their writing process?  Would it positively or negatively influence it?  As college students strive to excel in their studies, we need to fully understand how music—familiar and unfamiliar—affects the writing process.
Literature Review
            In 2001, the article “The effects of background music on word processed writing” by Sarah E. Ransdell and Leonard Gilroy was published in Computers in Human Behavior.  The purpose of their study was to determine, “whether background music disrupts [college students] ability to word process fluently and effectively” (141). 
            Prior to the experiment, the researchers administered a questionnaire to 45 volunteer students.  The questionnaire revealed that “67% [of the participants] had been trained to sing or play a musical instrument, [and] 51% sometimes listened to music while word processing” (143). Afterwards, the participants were tested.  The procedure used for gathering data went as follows:
            "All subjects participated in both the silent and music conditions.  Participants wrote two 10-min essays using a simple word processor, first in a silent control condition, and   second with one of the following, instrumental music, vocal music, or both.  The silent control will henceforth be compared to simply the “music” condition since none were reliably different from one another on any dependent measure.  Participants wore headphones in both conditions and were not required to respond or make any judgments; participants were told to concentrate on writing.  They were told to write as if writing for a professor in class...The two 10-min essays were written on the following topics: the best possible college class, best possible college instructor, best possible boyfriend/girlfriend, and best possible vacation" (145).
It should also be noted that the participants were unfamiliar with the music they were subjected to. 
            In order to determine if music affects word processing, Ransdell and Gilroy looked at the student’s writing fluency, average sentence length, percentage of long pauses, and writing quality (144).  Writing fluency, sentence length, and percentage of long pauses were measured using FauxWord—a computer program.  Writing quality was judged by student peers, and was based on organization, technical quality, word choice and arrangement, content, purpose, audience, and tone (144). 
            After collecting the data, Ransdall and Gilroy found that “the music condition significantly slowed word processed fluency with mean words generated per minute at 18.8 in the silent control condition and 17.8 in the music condition” (145).  As for effectiveness or quality, “it was not significantly reduced by the music condition” (146).  However, the study also showed that “[w]riters who had high writing span[1], or who had some musical training wrote essays of higher quality...” (146).  In their conclusion, Ransdall and Gilroy wrote, “One’s writing fluency is likely to be disrupted by both vocal and instrumental music.  And quality will be especially poor if one also has relatively poor memory skill and limited musical training” (147).
            Although this study associates student’s poor writing with background music, it doesn’t take into account the student’s own writing habits or musical choices.  If the students in Ransdall and Gilroy’s chose what they wanted to listen to and when they wanted to listen to it, how would the study differ? 
            This subject is important to discuss since many students listen to unfamiliar music and/or ambient noise while writing.  However, there is a large amount of students who listen to their own musical choices, under their own circumstances.  Thus, students know what music to listen to and when to listen to it while writing.  My goal in doing this research is not only to determine if listening to familiar music helps students think creatively and write fluently, but, also, to expose the choices students make in music selection while writing. 
Method
            Whereas Ransdall and Gilroy analyzed the essays of 45 college students, I chose to conduct a single interview, which I later transcribed for textual analysis.  I chose this method to get a personal account on the research topic.  I felt that this method was appropriate because it gives an intimate point of view on the research topic. 
            For my research, I interviewed S at a Barnes and Noble.  S is a college senior and honor student.  She is majoring in English with emphasis in professional writing.  She has never played a musical instrument; however, she did sing in a choir when she was younger.  Nonetheless, her days singing in choir are in her past.  S has been writing since second grade and started writing frequently in her diary at 11.  It wasn’t until college that S started listening to music while writing.  S normally writes with a pad and pencil at her desk while listening to music over her laptop.  The music is not random; hence, she has a playlist dedicated for when she writes.  Her playlist consists of 16 songs, most of them by John Mayer.  That being said, this qualifies her as the perfect subject for my study.
            After the interview I transcribed the data.  I labeled S’s speech in five distinct ways:
1) CAPITAL LETTERS = stress on words, which is higher in pitch from her normal voice.
2) Italicized Words = fast talk, which is faster in speech than her normal talk.
3) Underlined Words = low voice tone, which is lower in pitch and smoother than her normal talk.
4) Regular words = normal talk.
5) [laughing] = S laughed.
            When doing this textual analysis, I analyzed the content, along with these 5 distinctions in speech to answer my aforementioned research question.  In some instances during the transcription, I labeled the dialogue with two indicators.
Presentation and Analysis of the Data
            This data will focus on the following: Listening to music while studying and writing; music’s influence on the writing process (i.e. brainstorming, drafting, and/or revision); and how listening to music while writing positively affects a writing environment.
Definitions
             Familiar music is music known and liked by the subject.  It is music that the subject listens to regularly.  This music can be found on the subject’s iPod, MacBook, or any other listening device. 
            Unfamiliar music is music unknown by the subject.  It is music that the subject does not listen to. 
            Upbeat music is most commonly known as techno/house music. This type of music is often associated with dance clubs; hence, it is known for its fast tempo.  During the analysis S says, “I don’t really like...like loud and like...upbeat when I write, going out that’s a different story.”  When S says this she is referring to club music.
            A Writing Environment is a state in which writing occurs.  A positive writing environment fosters creativity and fluency (effortless flow while writing).  A negative writing environment will cause the opposite effect—stifled creativity and fluency while engaged in writing.  
Listening to music while studying and writing
            Most college students often listen to music while committing themselves to a variety of activities.  S is no different from her college peers.  S listens to music while working out, driving, getting ready for school, and writing.  When asked why she listens to music while exercising, S says, “Well, I don’t listen to the same music while I’m working out. BUT when I listen to music when I’m not working out, it just MAKES ME FEEL GOOD [laughing].”  Instead of answering the question, S makes it known that she doesn’t listen to the same music outside of exercising.  She then makes it imperative to focus on the positive feelings music has on her away from physical activity.  The fact that S’s voice pitches and speeds up on “MAKES ME FEEL GOOD”, confirms a pleasant emotion.  The laughing at the end of S’s answer indicates comfort.  In S’s case, the music that she listens to has a specific function, which evokes specific emotions.  The music she listens to outside from exercising gives her positive emotions.  And the music she exercises to isn’t enjoyable, since she never defines it as a good feeling. 
             When S is asked to discuss her music listening habits when she engages in homework and studying, her language turns negative.  Regarding the completion of homework while listening to music, S says, “YEAH, but I can’t listen to like upbeat music when I’m doing homework. Cuz then I just start like...I can’t concentrate.”  The beginning of this statement (i.e. YEAH, but...) indicates conflict between music and homework.  S admits that she listens to music while doing homework, but not upbeat music because it affects her concentration.  S can’t concentrate while listening to upbeat music because she links this type of music with dance clubs.  Nonetheless, when S is asked about music helping her study, she says, “Uhm, I don’t STUDY when, I don’t listen to music when I study. But I listen to music when I like write things or when I’m doing something else.”  S not only says that she doesn’t listen to music while studying, but her answer to the question implies that it doesn’t help her.  Because S concludes the answer with listening to music while writing and “doing something else” her language suggests that music does indeed help. 
            This part of the interview suggests that some students choose specific music to listen to for each activity they participate in.  As a result of the student’s own selection of music, they become motivated to engage in these activities.  Listening to music also seems to alter the student’s emotions.  That said, if students listen to their own playlist or favorite musician while writing, it would seemingly evoke emotions and motivate them to write.
 Music’s influence on the writing process (i.e. brainstorming, drafting, and/or revision)
            Later in the interview, S discusses her habits of listening to music during the writing process.  When S is asked how music affects her brainstorming and drafting, she says, “Uhm, I GUESS it’s different because when I’m brainstorming or coming up with ideas it’s like just random songs that like make me THINK. And I guess when I already have an idea and I’m writing, I’ll like listen to something like more like JOHN MAYER.  Something that I’m used to.”  In this quote S explains that she listens to random songs during brainstorming.  Nevertheless, during drafting S listens to John Mayer—an artist she is familiar with and comfortable writing to.  Her language in this quote implies thought into the question; hence, it begins with “Uhm, I GUESS.”  S emphasizes “THINK” to define how random songs create ideas while she brainstorms.  Similarly, John Mayer is accentuated to define who she listens to while drafting.  In both of these stages, S uses music to influence her writing, which is quite different from when she revises.
            When S talks about revision, she says, “And THEN, uhm, and then, actually when I REVISE, I like read out loud a lot to myself. So, I don’t think I listen to music when I do that. Cuz I think I read the same over and over and over again, like out loud.  And people might think, I’m—”  Unlike brainstorming and drafting, S can’t listen to music when she revises.  The emphasis on “THEN” and “REVISE” indicates that she is retelling her experience when she revises.  S increases the speed in her answer when she says, “I don’t think I listen to music when I do that.”  The increase in S’s language may imply that she is confident and uncomfortable with the answer; confident because she is able to form the answer without indicating thought; uncomfortable because she rushes through her answer.  Perhaps her uncomfortable feeling is associated with listening to music while revising.  At the end of S’s statement, she explains why she doesn’t listen to music: “Cuz I think I read the same over and over and over again, like out loud.  And people might think, I’m—”  Again, S is gathering her thoughts in this statement.  She then exaggerates her revisionary stage when she says, “I read the same thing over and over and over again.”  During revision S reads her writing multiple times.  This repetition indicates that revision is a dedicated process which, in S’s case, involves intense reading comprehension.  
            This segment of the interview demonstrates music’s influence on the college student’s writing process.  As seen in this portion of the interview, listening to music while brainstorming and drafting can positively affect the student’s writing process.  Familiar randomized songs played during brainstorming can help students conjure up ideas prior to drafting.  Ideas are important because they setup a paper’s topic.  During drafting, students listening to familiar music can improve fluency during writing.  Again, this is important because it allows the student’s writing to flow without being stifled.  Conversely, listening to music while revising may be counterproductive; thus, revision involves the manipulation of ideas and reading comprehension, which can be interrupted when students listen to music.  It should also be noted that a student’s freedom to choose his or her own music during the aforementioned process implies that students know what music to listen to and when it applies. 
Listening to music while writing positively affects a writing environment
            During the interview, S describes a specific instance when she wrote while listening to music.  S’s story begins with her traveling into New York City for work.  She says, “Mmhmm. And I was on the train. And then I was, cuz I was in a BAD mood.  I was writing about how going into the city SUCKED.  And it was like a little short story. And it was kinda FUNNY.  I liked it.”  S is retelling the story as if she was there.  S says that she was in a bad mood during this time.  Her emphasis on “BAD” and “SUCKED” implies a negative tone, which would satisfy her negative mood at that time.  Nonetheless, S’s tone turns positive when she discusses the short story she wrote while listening to music on the train.  “And it was kinda FUNNY.  I liked it.”  The emphasis on “FUNNY” defines her thoughts on her story.  And the tone in which she says, “I liked it”, confirms her positive feelings towards her written story.  Both of these indicators combined with the content imply a positive tone.  In essence, S used music to alter her mood.
            Later S is asked if music affected her writing and how so. She says, “Well, YEAH.  I like, well it helps me like zone—zone out from everyone else, I guess.  And, uhm, I think ACTUALLY, wow this is making me THINK, actually I think it’s better if I don’t listen to the same songs over and over again.  Cuz like each song kind like, cuz each song makes you THINK like a different kind a way.”  When S says, “Well, YEAH” this emphasis implies agreement, in that, music did help her.  She later says that listening to music allowed her to “zone-out” from everyone else.  Judging from the context, “zoning-out” is a state of mind in which S is able to write without the physical and emotional stressors associated with her environment.
            As witnessed in this part of the interview, music can alter a student’s mood as well as create a positive writing environment despite a negative atmosphere.  By listening to music while writing, college students can “zone-out” from physical and emotional stressors, and focus their efforts on writing. 
Conclusion
            Music, unfamiliar and familiar, affects the writing process.  Whereas, the research conducted by Ransdell and Gilroy proved that listening to unfamiliar music during writing disrupts fluency and quality, listening to familiar music while writing can benefit the writer in a few different ways. 
            First, listening to familiar music while writing can evoke emotions and motivate the student to write.  This is important because it creates a positive writing environment.  And a positive writing environment creates productivity.  Second, listening to familiar music that’s shuffled during the process of brainstorming helps create ideas.  As a writer, ideas are imperative before beginning a draft.  As students draft their papers, listening to familiar music can increase writing fluency.  On the other hand, students listening to music while revising may disrupt this stage; hence, as mentioned earlier, revision involves reading comprehension and manipulation of ideas.  Third, listening to familiar music while writing can establish a comfortable writing environment.  A comfortable writing environment fosters creativity and fluency in writing.
            This research also shows that the student’s choice in the matter is vital.  Students know what they want to listen to and when they want to listen to it during their writing process.  This is unlike the research conducted by Ransdell and Gilroy where students were not given the option to listen to their own music or when to listen to it.


Works Cited
  Ransdell, Sarah E., Leonard Gilroy. “The effects of background music on word processed           writing.” Computers in Human Behavior 17 (2001): 141-148. Elsevier Science Ltd. Web.          2 Apr. 2013. <http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0747563200000431



[1] Writing span is the memory needed for writers to link sentences (142).

Tuesday, May 7, 2013

Blog 27: Presentation of research project

Literature review:
-need to add points about college students knowing when to use music and when not to.
-need to indicate how students write opposed to how the study was conducted.

Method:
-explain why I chose personal account.
-explain why S is the ideal subject

Presentation and Analysis of the Data:
listening to music while studying and writing & music's influence on the writing process
-add a link between motivation and student's musical choices.

*I also noticed a Discourse today, which I might add into the conclusion.  If I do add this, my paper will extend beyond ten pages.

Blog 28: Evaluation of Research Paper

Data Analysis: (280/300)
-Blogs: 21, 22, 23, 24
-Blog 21: Transcript:
     -Despite having a well thought out set of questions prior to the interview, I actually lost focus while conducting it.  However, I didn't realize this error until I transcribed the interview.  I asked way too many yes/no questions and not enough open ended ones.  What I should have done was have the subject expand upon her thoughts.  Nonetheless, after I sat and analyzed the data, I realized the content was pertinent and important to discuss in the research paper.
-Blog 22: Data Analysis:
     -The analysis is split into 7 different categories, which I later try to link to the overall research question.  The writing quality in the analysis isn't great; however, it was purposely written as so to introduce ideas.  The categories are pertinent to my research question and logical.
-Blog 23: Methods & Beginning of Analysis & Blog 24: More Analysis
     -This blog shows the evolution of my analysis process.  It shows how I filtered my categories down to 3 important topics.  The writing quality is much better.  The discussion of music's effects on college writing seems logical.  However, there needs to be a stronger connection between the categories and the research topic.
*Overall, I feel like I did a decent job on my analysis.  The blogs show how I coned down my analysis and focused my ideas to the research question.  The categories seem logical.  However, the main ideas linking back to the research topic are barely peaking above average.
280/300

Writing process: (95/100)
-Blogs: 18, 23, 24, 25, 26
-Blog 18: Introduction and Literature Review
     -The introduction and literature review are a good start.  Its basically a rough draft of convoluted ideas.  It needed touching up, but it was my rough draft.
-Blog 23: Methods & Beginning of Analysis & Blog 24: More Analysis
     -Not a bad start.  Again, it needs some touching up. The block quotes seem extraneous and may need to be removed.  I also need more connection between my points and the research question.
-Blog 25: Complete rough draft
     -I wrote this prior to any feedback.  I thought the block quotes were important to my research, but after I received feedback from Dr. Chandler, I had to rethink their purpose.  She also noted that I need to make a stronger connection between what my analysis said and how it related to the research question.
-Blog 26: Revised draft
     -I deleted the block quotes from paper and tried to strengthen my points back to the focus.  Afterwards, I checked my spelling and grammar.
-Blog 27: Presentation of research project
     -I revised the areas that were commented on and included points within my paper to address the student's choice.
*There has been much progress made towards the completion of my research paper.  The writing process shows growth in the analysis.  It also shows the changes I have made to clarify and strengthen my points.  I have deleted the block quotes and focused my points back to my research topic.  Overall, I think I did a great job.


Essay: (95/100)
-Focus 28/30:
clear statement of the research question(s) + the importance of the research and what it shows 6
direct statement of what the data shows 6
set up any background information necessary for the reader to understand the focus 6
appropriate choice of research essays 6
data is connected to the focus/makes points with the respect to the focus 4

-Audience 23/25:
uses the correct forms for research essays 8.3
uses language the ways it is used in the sample research essays 7
draws authority from other research and the logic of the argument 8.3

-Organization 19/20:
data is presented in the right place 4
one idea leads logically to the next 4
definitions/data/categories are presented and explained before they are used or referred to 4
uses headings + paragraphing in ways suitable for the material 4
each section develops the focus in a different way 3

-Development 20/20:
detailed examples from the data to support the points 5
says what the examples show 5
connects to the discussion of the research 5
develops an in-depth (not obvious) discussion of what the data shows 5

-Correctness 5/5:
writing sufficiently so as not to confuse the meaning 2.5
not so many errors to distract rom the meaning of the text 2.5
95/100

Data Analysis: 280/300
Writing Process: 95/100
Paper: 95/100

Total: 470/500






Revised Draft


The Effects of Music on College Students Writing Process


Should college students listen to music while writing?
It started at the Starbucks on campus.  I sat at an open table with my headphones on, listening to Bruce Springsteen’s “I’m on Fire,” while I wrote a creative piece.  Then, it hit me—how was the Boss’s song influencing my writing?  Well, not so much Bruce, but music in general.   
Just think about it, nowadays most of us can’t even function without listening to music.  I know I can’t.  Whether I am doing homework or writing, I’m listening to music.  When homework seems unbearable, I play pop music to help alleviate the stress and push me through.  When I’m writing, I listen to slow music to get me in the mood, to give me ideas, and to help me think faster.  Music helps me—but, does it have the same effect on others?  In other words, does listening to music help or hinder the writing process of college students?  
    Although there have been studies showing music’s negative effects on the college student’s writing process, there has yet to be a study on students listening to their own musical choice while writing.  How would the student’s choice of music effect their writing process?  Would it positively or negatively influence it?  As college students strive to excel in their studies, we need to fully understand how music—familiar and unfamiliar—effects the writing process. 

Literature Review
In 2001, the article “The effects of background music on word processed writing” by Sarah E. Ransdell and Leonard Gilroy was published in Computers in Human Behavior.  The purpose of their study was to determine, “whether background music disrupts [college students] ability to word process fluently and effectively” (141).  
Prior to the experiment, the researchers administered a questionnaire to the 45 volunteer students.  The questionnaire revealed that, “67% [of the participants] had been trained to sing or play a musical instrument, [and] 51% sometimes listened to music while word processing” (143). Afterwards, the participants were tested.  The procedure used for gathering data goes as follows:
All subjects participated in both the silent and music conditions.  Participants wrote two 10-min essays using a simple word processor, first in a silent control condition, and second with one of the following, instrumental music, vocal music, or both.  The silent control will henceforth be compared to simply the “music” condition since none were reliably different from one another on any dependent measure.  Participants wore headphones in both conditions and were not required to respond or make any judgments; participants were told to concentrate on writing.  They were told to write as if writing for a professor in class...The two 10-min essays were written on the following topics: the best possible college class, best possible college instructor, best possible 
boyfriend/girlfriend, and best possible vacation (145). 
     It should also be noted that the participants were unfamiliar with the music they were subjected to.  
  In order to determine if music affects word processing, Ransdell and Gilroy looked at the student’s writing fluency, average sentence length, and the percentage of long pauses, and writing quality(144).  Writing fluency, sentence length, and percentage of long pauses were measured using FauxWord—a computer program.  On the other hand, writing quality was judged by student peers and was based on organization, technical quality, word choice and arrangement, content, purpose, audience, and tone (144).  
After collecting all the data, Ransdall and Gilroy found that, “the music condition significantly slowed word processed fluency with mean words generated per minute at 18.8 in the silent control condition and 17.8 in the music condition” (145).  As for effectiveness or quality, “it was not significantly reduced by the music condition” (146).  However, the study also showed that, “[w]riters who had high writing span, or who had some musical training wrote essays of higher quality...” (146).  In their conclusion, Ransdall and Gilroy write, “One’s writing fluency is likely to be disrupted by both vocal and instrumental music.  And quality will be especially poor if one also has relatively poor memory skill and limited musical training” (147).
Although, this article associates student’s poor writing with background music, it doesn’t take into account the student’s own musical choice.  If the students in Ransdall and Gilroy’s experiment were given the choice to pick their favorite musician or genre of music, how would the study differ?  
This subject is important to discuss since many students listen to unfamiliar music and ambient noise while writing.  My goal in doing this research is to determine if listening to familiar music helps students think creatively and write fluently during their writing process.  

Method 
Whereas Ransdall and Gilroy analyzed the essays of 45 college students, I chose to conduct an interview, which I later transcribed for textual analysis.  I chose this method to get a personal account on the research topic.  For my research, I interviewed S at a Barnes and Noble.  S is a college senior and honor student.  She is majoring in English with emphasis in professional writing.  She has never played a musical instrument; however, she did sing in a choir when she was younger.  Nonetheless, her days in choir are very much in her past.  S has been writing since second grade and started writing frequently in her diary at 11.  It wasn’t until college that S started listening to music while writing.  S normally writes with a pad and pencil at her desk while listening to music over her laptop.  The music is not random; hence, she has a playlist dedicated for when she writes.  Her playlist consists of 16 songs, most of them by John Mayer. 
After the interview I transcribed the data.  I labeled S’s speech in five distinct ways: 1)CAPITAL LETTERS=stress on words, which is higher in pitch from her normal voice.
2) Italicized Words=fast talk, which is faster in speech than her normal talk. 
3) Underlined Words=low voice tone, which is lower in pitch and smoother than her normal talk.
4) Regular words=normal talk.
5) [laughing]=S laughed.
When doing this textual analysis, I analyzed the content along with these 5 distinctions in speech to answer my aforementioned research question.  In some instances during the transcription I labeled the dialogue with two indicators.

The Presentation and Analysis of the Data
This data will focus on the following: Listening to music while studying and writing; music’s influence on the writing process (i.e. brainstorming, drafting, and/or revision); and how listening to music while writing positively affects a writing environment.
Definitions
Familiar music is music known and liked by the subject.  It is music that the subject listens to regularly.  This music can be found on the subject’s iPod, MacBook, or any other listening device.  
Unfamiliar music is music unknown by the subject.  It is music that the subject does not listen to.  
Upbeat music is most commonly known as techno/house music. This type of music is often associated with dance clubs; hence, it is known for its fast tempo.  During the analysis S says, “I don’t really like...like loud and like...upbeat when I write, going out that’s a different story.”  When S says this she is referring to club music.
A Writing Environment is a state in which writing occurs.  A positive writing environment fosters creativity and fluency or effortless flow while writing.  A negative writing environment will cause the opposite effect—stifled creativity and fluency while engaged in writing.   

Listening to music while studying and writing: 
Most college students often listen to music while committing themselves to a variety of activities.  S is no different from her college peers.  S listens to music while working-out, driving, getting ready for school, and writing.  When asked why she listens to music while exercising, S says, “Well, I don’t listen to the same music while I’m working out. BUT when I listen to music when I’m not working out, it just MAKES ME FEEL GOOD [laughing].”  Instead of answering the question, S makes it known that she doesn’t listen to the same music outside from exercising.  She then makes it imperative to focus on the positive feelings music has on her away from physical activity.  The fact that S’s voice pitches and speeds up on “MAKES ME FEEL GOOD” confirms a pleasant emotion.  The laughing at the end of S’s answer indicates comfort.  In S’s case, the music that she listens to has a specific function, which evokes specific emotions.  The music she listens to outside from exercising gives her positive emotions.  And the music she exercises to isn’t enjoyable, since she never defines it as a good feeling.  
     When S is asked to discuss her music listening habits when she engages in homework and studying, her language turns negative.  Regarding the completion of homework while listening to music, S says, “YEAH, but I can’t listen to like upbeat music when I’m doing homework. Cuz then I just start like...I can’t concentrate.”  The beginning of this statement (i.e. YEAH, but...) indicates conflict between music and homework.  S admits that she listens to music while doing homework, but not upbeat music because it affects her concentration.  S can’t concentrate while listening to upbeat music because she links this type of music with dance clubs.  Nonetheless, when S is asked about music helping her study, she says, “Uhm, I don’t STUDY when, I don’t listen to music when I study. But I listen to music when I like write things or when I’m doing something else.”  S not only says that she doesn’t listen to music while studying, but her answer to the question implies that it doesn’t help her.  Because S concludes the answer with listening to music while writing and “doing something else,” her language suggests that music does indeed help.  
This part of the interview suggests that some students listen to specific music for each activity they participate in.  The reason students do this is because music can help motivate them as well as evoke emotions.  If students listen to their own playlist or musician while writing, it would cause the same effect.

Music’s influence on the writing process (i.e. brainstorming, drafting, and/or revision)
Later in the interview, S discusses her habits of listening to music during the writing process.  When S is asked how music effects her brainstorming and drafting, she says, “Uhm, I GUESS its different because when I’m brainstorming or coming up with ideas its like just random songs that like make me THINK. And I guess when I already have an idea and I’m writing, I’ll like listen to something like more like JOHN MAYER.  Something that I’m used to.”  In this quote S explains that she listens to random songs during brainstorming. Nevertheless, during drafting S listens to John Mayer—an artist she is familiar with and comfortable writing to.  Her language in this quote implies thought into the question; hence, it begins with “Uhm, I GUESS.”  S emphasizes “THINK” to define how random songs create ideas while she brainstorms.  Similarly, John Mayer is accentuated to define who she listens to while drafting.  In both of these stages, S uses music to influence her writing, which is quite different from when she revises. 
When S talks about revision, she says, “And THEN, uhm, and then, actually when I REVISE, I like read out loud a lot to myself. So, I don’t think I listen to music when I do that. Cuz I think I read the same over and over and over again, like out loud.  And people might think, I’m—”  Unlike brainstorming and drafting, S can’t listen to music when she revises.  The emphasis on “THEN” and “REVISE” indicates she is retelling her experience when she revises.  S increases the speed in her answer when she says, “I don’t think I listen to music when I do that.”  The increase in S’s language may imply that she is confident and uncomfortable with the answer; confident because she is able to form the answer without indicating thought; uncomfortable because she rushes through her answer.  Perhaps her uncomfortable feeling is associated with listening to music while revising.  At the end of S’s statement, she explains why she doesn’t listen to music: “Cuz I think I read the same over and over and over again, like out loud.  And people might think, I’m—”  Again, S is gathering her thoughts in this statement.  She then exaggerates her revisionary stage when she says, “I read the same thing over and over and over again.”  During revision S reads her writing multiple times.  This repetition indicates that revision is a dedicated process which, in S’s case, involves intense reading comprehension.  
This segment of the interview demonstrates music’s influence on the college student’s writing process.  As seen in this portion of the interview, listening to music while brainstorming and drafting can positively effect the student’s writing process.  Familiar randomized songs played during brainstorming can help students conjure up ideas prior to drafting.  Ideas are important because they setup the paper’s topic.  During drafting, students listening to familiar music can improve fluency during writing.  Again, this is important because it allows the student’s writing to flow without being stifled.  Conversely, listening to music while revising may be counterproductive; thus, revision involves the manipulation of ideas and reading comprehension, which can be interrupted when students listen to music.  

Listening to music while writing positively effects a writing environment
During the interview, S describes a specific instance when she wrote while listening to music.  S’s story begins with her traveling into New York City for work.  She says, “Mmhmm. And I was on the train. And then i was, cuz I was in a BAD mood.  I was writing about how going into the city SUCKED.  And it was like a little short story. And it was kinda FUNNY.  I liked it.”  S is retelling the story as if she was there.  S says that she was in a bad mood during this time.  Her emphasis on “BAD” and “SUCKED” implies a negative tone, which would satisfy her negative mood at that time.  Nonetheless, S’s tone turns positive when she discusses the short story she wrote while listening to music on the train.  “And it was kinda FUNNY.  I liked it.”  The emphasis on “FUNNY” defines her thoughts on her story.  And the tone in which she says, “I liked it” confirms her positive feelings towards her written story.  Both of these indicators combined with the content imply a positive tone.  In essence, S used music to alter her mood.
Later S is asked if music effected her writing and how so. She says, “Well, YEAH.  I like, well it helps me like zone—zone out from everyone else, I guess.  And, uhm, I think ACTUALLY, wow this is making me THINK, actually I think its better if I don’t listen to the same songs over and over again.  Cuz like each song kind like, cuz each song makes you THINK like a different kind a way.”  When S says, “Well, YEAH” this emphasis implies agreement, in that, music did helped her.  She later says that listening to music allowed her to “zone-out” from everyone else.  Judging from the context, “zoning-out” is a state of mind in which S is able to write without the physical and emotional stressors associated with her environment. 
As witnessed in this part of the interview, music can alter a students mood as well as create a positive writing environment despite a negative atmosphere.  By listening to music while writing, college students can “zone-out” from physical and emotional stressors, and focus their efforts on writing.  

Conclusion
Music, unfamiliar and familiar, effects the writing process.  Whereas, the research conducted by Ransdell and Gilroy proved that listening to unfamiliar music during writing disrupts fluency and quality, listening to familiar music while writing can benefit the writer in a few ways.  
First, listening to familiar music while writing can evoke emotions.  This is important because it creates a positive writing environment.  And a positive writing environment creates productivity.  Second, listening to familiar music that’s shuffled during the process of brainstorming helps create ideas.  As a writer, ideas are imperative before beginning a draft.  As students draft their papers, listening to familiar music can increase writing fluency.  On the other hand, students listening to music while revising may disrupt this stage; hence, as mentioned earlier, revision involves reading comprehension and manipulation of ideas.  Third, listening to familiar music while writing can establish a comfortable writing environment.  A comfortable writing environment fosters creativity and fluency in writing. 
   
Works Cited
  Ransdell, Sarah E., Leonard Gilroy. “The effects of background music on word processed writing.” Computers in Human Behavior 17 (2001): 141-148. Elsevier Science Ltd. Web. 2 Apr. 2013. <http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0747563200000431>